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Why this letter was written
What prompted the letter
The letter examines a hypothetical learning agent in the CIMC whitepaper, focusing on changes in how it performs tasks and how it is organized. It asks what would support reading those changes as evidence of consciousness.
Why this matters to readers
Readers need to see why that interpretation is proposed and what favors it over another explanation of the same described changes.
What the letter asks
The letter asks for one alternative explanation and one claim supporting an interpretation in terms of consciousness, followed by an account of how that claim helps distinguish between them. The proposed explanation itself remains writing to be examined.
Sent letter · English transcription
The letter
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Dear Dr Bach,
In §IV.2 of the CIMC research whitepaper you coauthored (April 2026), the proposed evidence includes “structures interpretable as second-order perception”.
Your hypothetical learning-agent example combines changes in task performance and internal organization, assessed against alternative explanations.
Please indicate one competing explanation for that example and one supporting claim, explaining how the claim would favor the consciousness interpretation.
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Kirill Shebetov
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CIMC — Research Program Whitepaper, version 2 (April 2026)
§ IV.2 Interpretive Validation, pp. 16–17 (PDF pages 17–18), including the hypothetical learning-agent example.
The PDF identifies itself as version 2, published 27 April 2026; it contains the wording quoted in the letter.
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