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Why this letter was written
What prompted the letter
The starting point is Clark’s statement, quoted in the letter, about thoughts becoming determinate and public objects. The letter focuses on one specific move: describing a revision to a written argument as a correction of thought.
Why this matters to readers
Readers need to distinguish a change in wording, which can be compared with an earlier version, from the interpretation of that revision as a change in thought.
What the letter asks
The letter asks for one worked example showing what warrants calling the revision a correction of thought. The explanation and its chosen criterion are then open to the same examination as the original text.
Sent letter · English transcription
The letter
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Dear Professor Clark,
In “Magic Words: How Language Augments Human Computation”, you write: “Our thoughts become determinate and public objects”.
Your account gives linguistic formulations an active role in reshaping cognition.
Please indicate, using one example of revising a written argument, what would warrant describing the revision as a correction of a thought.
beforeword proposes keeping three elements separately inspectable: the written revision, its interpretation as correcting a thought, and the grounds offered for that interpretation.
The terms “thought” and “correction” remain part of the writing under examination. Descriptions of cognitive processes, any proposed criterion and its justification, human self-descriptions, and this letter receive the same treatment.
The reading procedure and worked examples:
https://beforeword.xyz/model/en/
Kirill Shebetov
beforeword
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Publications discussed in the letter
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Andy Clark — Magic Words: How Language Augments Human Computation
PDF page 13, paragraph on thoughts becoming determinate and public objects.
Full text in the University of Edinburgh repository; includes the quotation discussed in the letter.
Sending record and files
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Correspondence record
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